So my Deviation 15 things you don't want to hear in the TARDIS has now been converted into an ongoing story. Chp4 is up and Mudman chief is ranting madly and the Doctor's grinning like mad. He has a plan ...

Please read it and let me know what you think. A writer needs feedback to improve their stories.

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